First Impressions - The Pitch

After viewing all of the pitches and finding out who i will be working with this year it is only necessary to show you, My Viewers, what those pitches were.

Below are recorded copies of both my own and the rest of the group's pitches:

My Pitch -

Sam B A2 Treatment Pitch from Gavin Hood on Vimeo.

Josh's Pitch -

Josh A2 Treatment Pitch from Gavin Hood on Vimeo.

Tom's Pitch -

Tom A2 Treatment Pitch from Gavin Hood on Vimeo.

Now that we have heard each others Pitch's it only makes sense to compile a list of strengths from each of them and from that we can build a successful concept.

 Initial Concept Ideas:

• Josh's Characters (Jamie and Rose)
• My own storyline with some alterations such as removing the highly graphic depiction of the woman's death.
• Josh's idea of a rose being held tightly in someones grasp, so much that blood begins to drip onto the ground.

 The next step in our Short's Production is to write a single, detailed treatment which we can use as a backbone for the rest of the production process. On top of this i feel it is also necessary to assign group members with specific roles, that way we can work in areas we are comfortable with and have enthusiasm in. From this i believe we can all have a lot of fun and put our hearts into the production process.